Change:Hello-Hello Octo,Some awesome poetry you have here. What you write is real, yet original. Very inspiring. I like that.i-i read thru a couple of ur poems. they r different. ur different, original. i like that. i am also different in a sorta invisible way. u have   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1084) View all updates.

Change:It is my state of singularity that drives me,harbinger of skeletonsthat crowns my wasted passion.Screaming from inside my minda yearning I cannot but wonder if you feel.The accursed blessedness of yearning the crux of all desire.Embers of my exalted love grow dimto   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1086) View all updates.

Change:Poetry Reviews Mental FortressRating: Good Well expressed poem. I just think the 5th stanza (If mental slaughter is to cease)doesn't really fit with the rest of the poem. It kinda breaks the nice flow. Kaminten Star-boyRating: Excellent This is excellent. It's quite   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 868) View all updates.

Change: mh, not bad, makes me think of the holocaust... and injecting morphine in a tree. Horrific and pointless but powerful in a unrestrained and yet   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 867) View all updates.

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Change:the words of the wise few?"Please purchase my book and defend freedom of speech. Author BLOGNewest Author BLOGboylovveringHaters are all the same. It is better to love and make a new friend everyday than to hate and make a new enemy.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 519) View all updates.

Change:forthfourth publisher released my book for public sale just last September 2006 but they canceled the 3-year contract with me after just 1 month. They claimed it was "a business decision" based on threats of litigation and they did not wish to defend free speech of sexual minority rights.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 520) View all updates.

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